Aiden
Minish
AIDEN OF THE HALF-SMILE
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Post by Aiden on Jul 29, 2011 15:58:30 GMT -5
x x AIDENAIDEN OF THE HALF-SMILE
RACE,
Hybrid Hylian and Human/Minish hybrid with the Minish being dominant
GENDER,
Male
BATTLE ROLE,
melee dps
BATTLE STYLE,
Story and LS (moderate)
AGE,
18
ALLIANCE,
to be added later.
PERSONALITY,
Positive
- kind
- friendly
- gentle
- mysterious
- helpful
Negative
- arrogant
- hot-tempered
- dark
- resentful
- wild
APPEARANCE,
Normal form
Draconian form
In the normal form he stands at 5'7 feet and weighs slightly at one hundred and twenty lbs. He has brown hair, with blue eyes. He wears normal clothes, and he wears boots when he is walking. He had mostly wore any kind of clothes that is comfortable towards him.
In his Draconian form his hair and eyes gone white. He is mostly looking like a human being still only his Minish traits takes over. He mostly had a tattoo in the middle of his chest, and he can't even know where it went to. He can control his transformation at will.
WEAPONS,
long sword
ITEMS,
You can have as many items as you like.
ABILITIES,
Wings- he can fly with this ability he can also change his eyes white with cat-shape pupils with white hair.
Fire bolts- he has the ability to throw a projectile of 3 fire bolts. He has been having this ability since his eighteen birthday. He still learning how to control the fire bolts. Which causes normal fire damage, and he has to be awfully careful with this its very moderate the fire damage then the low-damage then he could do. He has no idea of what to do when it comes to his own abilities. He can only use this one post and have a cooldown of one post
RACIAL ABILITIES,
Animal Form: Aiden can shapeshift into a dragon thanks to his connection to the draconian size of his family. He had been born with the ability to turn into a dragon, but that didn't show itself until his 18th birthday. He had turned into a dragon, and he was awfully scared he still looked human enough to get by with the rest of the Hylians, and Humans, but he also can't live normally with them since he is also hybrid with the shapeshifting ability of a dragon. three posts and then has a cooldown of three more posts.
Invisibility: Aiden can temporarily turns invisible, meaning the enemy cannot target them in the next turn; if Aiden find himself in an area-of-effect attack, he is still vulnerable, however. Meanwhile, a physical attack used while Invisible deals more damage than usual (an extra level of damage). Invisibility only lasts for one turn, and has a cooldown of five posts.
HISTORY,
Aiden was born to a Hyalian mother and a Human/Minish father. He had been born in Hyrule, but he he was mostly had been treated as an outsider. His father had told him that he had Draconian ancestors. Aiden had been trying to figured out what his father had meant he would find out when he was eighteen years old. He was very much had been trying to figure out what his father had meant by his words "when you are eighteen you will figure out what you meant by shapeshifting." Aiden had been trying to live his life normally as he possibly could.
He had never know what was to expect, but he had been living in Hyrule afraid to show anyone that he was even a hybrid. He had turned eighteen, and he had started shapeshifting, and he had never knew that was even possible. He was mostly had been trying to live his life as normal as he could. Aiden had never thought he was ever going to live his life that normal. His mother Furiae had wanted him to live as normal as he possibly could. Of course, Aiden had needed his life to be somewhat fun, but he has always work hard to live in Hyrule.
EXTRAS,
Any extra tidbits you want to add go in here.
FACE CLAIM,
nowe, [i]DRAKENGARD 2[/i]
OTHER CHARACTERS,
none
HOW DID YOU FIND US,
Wilder
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Post by Owen Enders on Jul 30, 2011 3:05:30 GMT -5
Minor things here.
First off, may wanna sort out a few typos, like replacing "Hyallian" with "Hylian".
Your Fire Bolt ability is a little underpowered, you could change that to being able to fire 3 firebolts in one turn with a one post cooldown, if you want. Means you get a bit more "firepower". =P
Everything else looks fine to me.
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Aiden
Minish
AIDEN OF THE HALF-SMILE
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Post by Aiden on Jul 31, 2011 8:03:36 GMT -5
updated.
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Post by Owen Enders on Jul 31, 2011 9:19:14 GMT -5
I'm good with this.
2/3 APPROVED!
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Post by Ryst Seraphine on Jul 31, 2011 11:19:31 GMT -5
Since you specified LS as one of your battle styles I need to ask this: how much damage (in LS terms found HERE) do the firebolts do? Other than that everything else is good.
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Aiden
Minish
AIDEN OF THE HALF-SMILE
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Post by Aiden on Jul 31, 2011 11:27:13 GMT -5
updated.
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Post by Ryst Seraphine on Jul 31, 2011 11:37:52 GMT -5
Alright, moderate damage is fine. A little underwhelming, the entire attack (that is all three firebolts together) can likely do Heavy (two levels) damage at maximum with your current cooldown. Also you added a fifty percent clause, but that would be impossible to properly monitor on a forum. You're best bet is taking that out and just allowing them to hit normally.
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Aiden
Minish
AIDEN OF THE HALF-SMILE
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Post by Aiden on Jul 31, 2011 11:44:19 GMT -5
fixed.
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Post by Ryst Seraphine on Jul 31, 2011 11:46:33 GMT -5
A P P R O V E D ! !
Alright, go get 'em.
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