lilark
Human
The Wanderer
The Wanderer
Posts: 5
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Post by lilark on Jul 9, 2011 20:26:13 GMT -5
RACE,
Human.
GENDER,
Male
BATTLE ROLE,
Jack of All.
BATTLE STYLE,
Casual or LS.
AGE,
20
ALLIANCE,
Chaotic Good.
PERSONALITY,
Positive
- Kind
- Loyal
- Cunning
- Brave
- Good Judge of Character
Negative
- Introvert
- Stubborn
- Brash
- Lazy
- Only shows respect to those he deems worthy.
APPEARANCE,
Lilark would normally stand out anywhere he goes, thanks to his unique appearance. Golden blond hair covers his head, neck, ears, and forehead, with bangs partially covering his eyes. He also usually has a decent amount of stubble on his face, since he hates to shave. Lilark stands about six and a half feet tall, making his toned body appear deceptively thin. His eyes are constantly moving between shades of blue and gray, depending on his mood. The darker his mood, the darker and more grey his eyes become. His skin is a healthy tanned peach.
Lilark often finds himself away from civilization, so he has to dress more ruggedly than most. Normally he wears a pair of dark brown leather boots, dark brown breeches, a crimson, sleeveless tunic, and finger-less, brown leather gloves. When Lilark has to go into town, he usually wears a brown, hooded cloak to avoid undue attention. The one thing he wears constantly is a silver wolf's head pendant on a silver rope chain, his only reminder of his mother.
WEAPONS,
Lilark has a steel hand-and-a-half sword roughly 4 feet long, with a hollow diamond shaped blade, a plain cross guard, and a hilt wrapped with purple cloth. His preferred weapon is his oak quarterstaff, which is about 6 feet long.
ITEMS,
Lilark currently has no other items.
ABILITIES,
Duskfire(Ranged) - By speaking the phrase "Flames of rage, launch!" while holding his hand palm-first towards the opponent, a purple fireball roughly one foot in diameter will shoot towards the opponent, causing moderate damage if it hits. Lilark can charge the spell by remaining posed and not saying "launch." By charging an extra turn, the fireball becomes 2 feet in diameter and deals heavy damage. Note that Lilark can move while charging, but cannot attack, speak, or use the arm pointing at the opponent. Cooldown: Non-charged 1 posts, Charged 3 posts.
Duskfire(Melee) - By speaking the phrase "Flames of rage, surround!" while holding his hand-and-a-half sword, Purple flames envelope the blade, enhancing the damage of a normal attack to heavy damage. This version cannot be charged. Cooldown: 2 posts.
Dawn's Light - By speaking the phrase "Light of compassion, soothe!" while touching an injured person, that person will be healed moderate healing. If Lilark is not touching another creature, the healing is done to him instead. This ability cannot be charged. Cooldown: 1 posts
RACIAL ABILITIES,
Extra Magic Slot
HISTORY,
Lilark was born a bastard, thanks to his father running off shortly after his conception. Shamed by everyone around her, Lilark’s mother, Ziya, constantly moved from town to town, never staying long enough to settle down. Lilark grew up in this life and didn’t mind it at all, but it came at the price of safety. One night shortly after Lilark’s 14th birthday, he was refilling the waterskins when Ziya was attacked by bandits. By the time he got back to camp, all that was left was ashes and Ziya’s silver necklace. Clutching the wolf’s head pendant tightly, he cried himself to sleep next to a nearby tree. Upon awakening, he swore an oath to live life to the fullest, and to never let what was lawful stop him from doing what was right. He knew that going after Ziya’s killers was suicide, and his mom wouldn’t want him to throw away his life like that. The only way Lilark was going to survive was to become stronger, but he would need help for that.
He went to Hyrule Town, and became an apprentice blacksmith to earn his keep, all the while learning the ways of combat. He even learned two basic spells, but couldn’t learn more due to his workload. Finally, six long, hard years later, Lilark was 20 and ready to stand on his own two feet. His final piece of metalwork was a hand-and-a-half sword and matching scabbard custom made for his use. As a parting gift, the master blacksmith gave him an oak quarterstaff, and the blacksmith’s wife gave him a pair of brown, finger-less gloves. Leaving the town was difficult, as it was more of a home than anyplace else, but Lilark had sworn an oath to his mother to live to the fullest. As he knelt in the now unmarked clearing marking Ziya’s grave, he knew he had to fulfill that oath. Lilark stood, hood down as his hair and cloak blew in the breeze, and started walking…
EXTRAS,
Nothing to see here, move along.
FACE CLAIM,
Kurosaki Ichigo, Bleach
OTHER CHARACTERS,
None.
HOW DID YOU FIND US,
Former member of Final Mix.
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Post by Azler Wilder on Jul 10, 2011 14:58:45 GMT -5
Looks good to me~ Approved! 2/3 [/b][/center]
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Post by Rwaht on Jul 10, 2011 22:29:17 GMT -5
This is a hilariously welcome trend, but you're actually pretty underpowered.
For Duskfire, you could easily get away with moderate damage for a one post cooldown, while the charged version could do heavy damage for 3 posts.
Also, Duskfire (melee) doesn't need a cooldown, and even without one there are abilities on the site that are more powerful. If you kept the same cooldown, you could make Duskfire (melee) into a move that makes regular attacks deal heavy damage.
Finally, your healing ability should only need a one-post cooldown. Again, none of this is a problem, really, I just figured you ought to know what you can do.
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lilark
Human
The Wanderer
The Wanderer
Posts: 5
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Post by lilark on Jul 11, 2011 3:43:26 GMT -5
Thanks for the tip. I took your suggestions and bumped up the damages accordingly. I have a habit of underpowering my characters when I'm new to a site, since I don't know what to expect.
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Post by Rwaht on Jul 11, 2011 15:22:00 GMT -5
Yeah, dude, I did the same thing. The original Rwaht on Requiem was ridiculously underpowered, and would eventually go on to become a walking supernuke. I really like the character, by the by, glad to see it on here. Anyhow, that said...
RWAHTPPROVAL
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