Echo Faust, Updates and Fixes!!!

[Echo Faust]

FIX #1, TYPOS

Underneath the ITEMS, can someone please simply just paste this over what is there already? All I did is fix some typos, I did not change any of the content or the like; I'd have not bothered, but my OCD eats me alive.

The only thing that she has possession of, that she was able to take with her from her previous life, is a beautiful gold pocket watch that appears to have been worth a great value. It is a constant reminder of time, endlessly flowing as she remains as still as her bones lying six feet underground.

The same thing goes for the second paragraph of my APPEARANCE section, I haven't changed anything for this is just to clean up typos in this section as well.

With a sea of hair that flows between a deep purple and a majestic blue, it is complimented by her eyes that follow the same colour gradient. A ghastly pale nature her skin takes on, a symbol for her true nature; just about five feet and four inches, her weight holds no value in this ethereal shell in which she resides. Normally adorned in old Victorian garments that seem to have been sewn together just for her burial, her outfit is limitless in what it can be; this possibly insinuates that she can shift forms.

Finally, in the last paragraph of my HISTORY, there were fixes here as well; I did not change any of the content, only corrected errors.

Her brief and violent time on this world, one that was once happy and full of innocence, came to an end spontaneously one night. No one could explain why the life had left her form, for there simply was no evidence that any physical damage overcame her and stopped that precious little heart of hers. It is almost as if she had been fed up with everything and everyone she had to be around that she simply decided to leave as quietly as she came into this life.

Hopefully this isn't too much of a hassle; it isn't really that important, so it doesn't need to be taken care of immediately! Hopefully something shameful as this can be sufficient reason for some editing. I feel bad for having others have to clean up after my mistakes! You can find the link to my character thread in my signature, hopefully that makes things a lot quicker and easier for whoever the nice person is who takes care of this worthless task for little old me!

[Jabberwocky]

1/3 Approved

[Azler Wilder]

Update Approved and edited in~ I know your feeling hun, OCD rules me too lol

Also Echo, you may want to make it more clear that Status is your CS lol *Was confused for a moment*

[Echo Faust]

UPDATE #1, EXTRAS

I would like to add four links: one to my character's theme song, another to her soundtrack as a whole, one of her character design, and one to a thread that keeps everything else related to her.

[ul]
[li]Dossier: [url=http://tinyurl.com/3h6d275][color=6600CC]DECEASED.NULL[/color][/url]
[/li][li]Character Design: [url=http://i55.tinypic.com/9znmnc.jpg][color=6600CC]9ZNMNC.PNG[/color][/url]
[/li][li]Theme Song: [url=http://tinyurl.com/44crebd][color=6600CC]0F_LIBERATEDLIBERATER.OGG[/color][/url]
[/li][li]Soundtrack: [url=http://tinyurl.com/3dcpjve][color=6600CC]EFSOUND.RAR[/color][/url][/li][/ul]

On a little side note, I have a question! This might be a bit out of line to ask, and if you want someone to blame then blame my OCD! But, um, is it possible to get rid of the approval posts in my character sheet so that only the original post remains? It isn't that I don't enjoy being accepted by those around me and having it show or anything, I just think it'd look a bit cleaner that way... But, either way, it's fine with me (I guess)!

[Azler Wilder]

Since its non-combat oriented, approved without #/3.

No, sorry lol I need those posts still there for a reason.

Also! Check the Race thread and update yourself with Poe! lol


Lastly, thank you for changing your sig~

[Echo Faust]

That is wonderful news! Will someone go ahead and change my member group to it already then!? Here is the code to add the newly listed RACIAL ABILITIES in my character sheet!

[ul]
[li][b]Phantasm[/b]: A constant passive ability, no Poe can be touched by a solid non-magical object, but neither can they touch them as well.

[/li][li][b]Energy Blast[/b]: The Poe can fire off a sphere of pure energy, capable of dealing moderate damage if it hits an opponent. Two post Cooldown.

[/li][li][b]Energy Drain[/b]: The Poe's body becomes completely fluid energy, capable of absorbing a single magical attack used against them and healing a moderate portion of their health regardless of how strong the attack was. Six Post Cooldown.

[/li][li][b]Invisibility[/b]: The Poe temporarily turns completely invisible, meaning the enemy cannot target them in the next turn; if they find themselves in an area-of-effect attack, they are still vulnerable, however. Only lasts for two turns, and has a cooldown of six posts.

[/li][li][b]Scream[/b]: A screeching sound wave that disorients all nearby enemies for one turn, preventing them from being able to attack, but does allow them to defend. Usable once every six posts, but is only only available to characters that start out as Poes.
[/li][/ul]

[Owen Enders]

It would appear that we don't have a Poe member group yet... and only Az has the power to make groups, so you'll have to wait for him to come on for that to happen.

I'll add the Racial Abilities in though.

[Azler Wilder]

Poe Member group made, you've been put in so all these updates are done~