Slaughter // Updates & Edits

[Slaughter]

Update #1: Abilities

Slaughter, so oblivious to her own blood, has just begun to discover her heritage. With her Ooccan genome beginning to newly express itself, Slaughter is experiencing physical changes in her body that she will someday soon learn how to harness and use for her own benefit.

Purgatory
A transformation with an abundance of theatrics reveals itself anytime Slaughter needs to go on the offensive. The transformation occurs in three stages, and also has three levels of power associated with it. This ability can be seen as an extension of Slaughter's self, and is essentially her inner essence manifesting itself in the form of colored energy.

STAGE ONE: Two gnarled brown horns will protrude and eventually break through the top of the girl's skull. The energy that Slaughter has stockpiled up until this point can be released in one of two ways: directly from her own hands, or channeled into a weapon. When expelled from her hands, this ability will shoot a beam of turquoise colored energy straight out in front of her. When used in conjunction with her katana, a turquoise glow will envelop her blade and cause more damage than without the boost of this ability. Cooldown of one post.


STAGE TWO: Slaughter's irises will be dyed by a seemingly natural pigment that is dormant up until this point. They will be colored a deep red, and her pupils will experience a form of miosis and become increasingly constricted. The second stage of Purgatory creates a mirror effect, and when used with her hands a red beam of energy will shoot out in front of her, and also directly behind her. When used with her katana, she will slash out in front of her and an equal cut will appear and slash through space directly behind her. Cooldown of two posts.

STAGE THREE: The altered differentiation of characteristics in Slaughter's genetic make-up reaches its pinnacle in this final stage. Her horns will become increasingly knotted and darker in color, and her hair will turn a opaque, jet black. When used without a weapon, amber colored energy will encircle and radiate from all over her body. When expelled, it will cause damage to anything within range. When used with her katana, a single slash will create a host of cuts that will slash through space and cause damage to anything within range. Cooldown of three posts.

Note: Stage One takes one post to stockpile energy for. Stage Two takes two posts. Stage Three takes three posts.


[blockquote][u][b]Purgatory[/b][/u]
A transformation with an abundance of theatrics reveals itself anytime Slaughter needs to go on the offensive. The transformation occurs in three stages, and also has three levels of power associated with it. This ability can be seen as an extension of Slaughter's self, and is essentially her inner essence manifesting itself in the form of colored energy.

[img=http://i212.photobucket.com/albums/cc265/sanicomo/rin9.png align=left][b]STAGE ONE:[/b] Two gnarled brown horns will protrude and eventually break through the top of the girl's skull. The energy that Slaughter has stockpiled up until this point can be released in one of two ways: directly from her own hands, or channeled into a weapon. When expelled from her hands, this ability will shoot a beam of turquoise colored energy straight out in front of her. When used in conjunction with her katana, a turquoise glow will envelop her blade and cause more damage than without the boost of this ability. Cooldown of one post.

[img=http://i212.photobucket.com/albums/cc265/sanicomo/kagaminerinredeyes-3.png align=left][b]STAGE TWO:[/b] Slaughter's irises will be dyed by a seemingly natural pigment that is dormant up until this point. They will be colored a deep red, and her pupils will experience a form of miosis and become increasingly constricted. The second stage of Purgatory creates a mirror effect, and when used with her hands a red beam of energy will shoot out in front of her, and [i]also[/i] directly behind her. When used with her katana, she will slash out in front of her and an equal cut will appear and slash through space directly behind her. Cooldown of two posts.

[img=http://i212.photobucket.com/albums/cc265/sanicomo/kagaminerinsunnyskies2.png align=left][b]STAGE THREE:[/b] The altered differentiation of characteristics in Slaughter's genetic make-up reaches its pinnacle in this final stage. Her horns will become increasingly knotted and darker in color, and her hair will turn a opaque, jet black. When used without a weapon, amber colored energy will encircle and radiate from all over her body. When expelled, it will cause damage to anything within range. When used with her katana, a single slash will create a host of cuts that will slash through space and cause damage to anything within range. Cooldown of three posts.

[b]Note[/b]: Stage One takes one post to stockpile energy for. Stage Two takes two posts. Stage Three takes three posts.[/blockquote]

Halo Twist

An ability that has reared itself when Slaughter was in danger, this ability reveals itself when her safety is in jeopardy and she needs to go on the defensive. This ability also has physical changes associated with it, including the sudden and rapid growth of the girl's hair, due to the different effects of the burst of chemicals coursing through her veins at this time. If Slaughter is threatened, a field of golden energy will bubble up and form a barrier around her person, and essentially cocoon her, protecting her from any attacks. Lasts two posts, cooldown of one post.


[blockquote][u][b]Halo Twist[/b][/u]

[img=http://i212.photobucket.com/albums/cc265/sanicomo/SunnyBluHaloTwist.png align=left]An ability that has reared itself when Slaughter was in danger, this ability reveals itself when her safety is in jeopardy and she needs to go on the defensive. This ability also has physical changes associated with it, including the sudden and rapid growth of the girl's hair, due to the different effects of the burst of chemicals coursing through her veins at this time. If Slaughter is threatened, a field of golden energy will bubble up and form a barrier around her person, and essentially cocoon her, protecting her from any attacks. Lasts two posts, cooldown of one post.[/blockquote]  

Edit #1: Extras

If my abilities are approved:
On my extras, I would appreciate if all the graphics under that section could be wiped out and replaced by this:

Alter Ego (Sunny Skies):

It is something about the overwhelming surge of unfamiliar hormones that seems to prompt a personality change in the young hybrid. After reaching the final stage of Purgatory, Slaughter's awakened powers seem to put a hold on the inhibiting neurotransmitters in her brain, induce supplementary re-uptakes of testosterone, and temporarily freeze her neural fear circuits. She receives no additional powers due to this alteration in character, other than a heightened sense of (perhaps false) invincibility. During this time, Slaughter's memory is clouded, and she will act far more aggressive, confident, and often forget who she is. At times she will claim to be a different person entirely.


[blockquote][b][u]Alter Ego (Sunny Skies):[/u][/b]

[img=http://i212.photobucket.com/albums/cc265/sanicomo/kagaminerinsunnyskies3.png align=left]It is something about the overwhelming surge of unfamiliar hormones that seems to prompt a [b]personality change[/b] in the young hybrid. After reaching the final stage of [i]Purgatory[/i], Slaughter's awakened powers seem to put a hold on the inhibiting neurotransmitters in her brain, induce supplementary re-uptakes of testosterone, and temporarily freeze her neural fear circuits. She receives no additional powers due to this alteration in character, other than a heightened sense of (perhaps false) invincibility. During this time, Slaughter's memory is clouded, and she will act far more aggressive, confident, and often forget who she is. At times she will claim to be a different person entirely.[/blockquote]

[Owen Enders]

Ok.


Abilities

Purgatory
I like the ability a lot and all three transformations are fine to me. However (and I've said this to another character that used an ability based around transforming through stages), you cannot have all three stages from the start as they are effectively three different abilities. You would only be allowed to have the one and then introduce the others over time through updates.

EDIT: Just a note, you actually have enough to purchase an MU to upgrade Purgatory, so you could go straight in and have the first two stages here if you're willing to fork out 150 rupees for it.


Halo Twist
Cooldown will need to be increased to something along the lines of 4 turns if it protects her from all damage for that amount of time.


Extras

All good and fine, the second person to pass approval on this can update all that for you.

[Slaughter]

Well what if I just cut it down to two stages (combined the first and second transformations), forked over the moolah, and called it a day? (;B

Also, thanks for taking the time to help me with this. I really appreciate it.

[Owen Enders]

Yah, that'd be fine if you're happy to do that. May as well if you've got the money for it. I'm good to pass approval once you've updated/confirmed that and updated Halo Twist.

[Slaughter]

REVISED

Update #1: Abilities

Slaughter, so oblivious to her own blood, has just begun to discover her heritage. With her Ooccan genome beginning to newly express itself, Slaughter is experiencing physical changes in her body that she will someday soon learn how to harness and use for her own benefit.

Purgatory
A transformation with an abundance of theatrics reveals itself anytime Slaughter needs to go on the offensive. The transformation occurs in three stages, and also has three levels of power associated with it. This ability can be seen as an extension of Slaughter's self, and is essentially her inner essence manifesting itself in the form of colored energy.

PRIMARY STAGE: Two gnarled brown horns will protrude and eventually break through the top of the girl's skull. Slaughter's irises will be dyed by a seemingly natural pigment that is dormant up until this point. They will be colored a deep red, and her pupils will experience a form of miosis and become increasingly constricted. The energy that Slaughter has stockpiled up until this point can be released in one of two ways: directly from her own hands, or channeled into a weapon. Purgatory creates a mirror effect, and when used with her hands a turquoise beam of energy will shoot out in front of her, and also directly behind her. When used in conjunction with her katana, she will slash out in front of her and an equal cut will appear and slash through space directly behind her. Cooldown of one post.

FINAL STAGE: The altered differentiation of characteristics in Slaughter's genetic make-up reaches its pinnacle in this final stage. Her horns will become increasingly knotted and darker in color, and her hair will turn a opaque, jet black. When used without a weapon, amber colored energy will encircle and radiate from all over her body. When expelled, it will cause damage to anything within range. When used with her katana, a single slash will create a host of cuts that will slash through space and cause damage to anything within range. Cooldown of two posts.

Note: Primary Stage takes one post to stockpile energy for. Final Stage takes two posts.


[blockquote][u][b]Purgatory[/b][/u]
A transformation with an abundance of theatrics reveals itself anytime Slaughter needs to go on the offensive. The transformation occurs in three stages, and also has three levels of power associated with it. This ability can be seen as an extension of Slaughter's self, and is essentially her inner essence manifesting itself in the form of colored energy.

[img=http://i212.photobucket.com/albums/cc265/sanicomo/kagaminerinhornsredeyes.png align=left][b]PRIMARY STAGE:[/b] Two gnarled brown horns will protrude and eventually break through the top of the girl's skull. Slaughter's irises will be dyed by a seemingly natural pigment that is dormant up until this point. They will be colored a deep red, and her pupils will experience a form of miosis and become increasingly constricted. The energy that Slaughter has stockpiled up until this point can be released in one of two ways: directly from her own hands, or channeled into a weapon. Purgatory creates a mirror effect, and when used with her hands a turquoise beam of energy will shoot out in front of her, and [i]also[/i] directly behind her. When used in conjunction with her katana, she will slash out in front of her and an equal cut will appear and slash through space directly behind her. Cooldown of one post.

[img=http://i212.photobucket.com/albums/cc265/sanicomo/kagaminerinsunnyskies2.png align=left][b]FINAL STAGE:[/b] The altered differentiation of characteristics in Slaughter's genetic make-up reaches its pinnacle in this final stage. Her horns will become increasingly knotted and darker in color, and her hair will turn a opaque, jet black. When used without a weapon, amber colored energy will encircle and radiate from all over her body. When expelled, it will cause damage to anything within range. When used with her katana, a single slash will create a host of cuts that will slash through space and cause damage to anything within range. Cooldown of two posts.

[b]Note[/b]: Primary Stage takes one post to stockpile energy for. Final Stage takes two posts. [/blockquote]

Halo Twist

An ability that has reared itself when Slaughter was in danger, this ability reveals itself when her safety is in jeopardy and she needs to go on the defensive. This ability also has physical changes associated with it, including the sudden and rapid growth of the girl's hair, due to the different effects of the burst of chemicals coursing through her veins at this time. If Slaughter is threatened, a field of golden energy will bubble up and form a barrier around her person, and essentially cocoon her, protecting her from any attacks. Lasts two posts, cooldown of four posts.


[blockquote][u][b]Halo Twist[/b][/u]

[img=http://i212.photobucket.com/albums/cc265/sanicomo/SunnyBluHaloTwist.png align=left]An ability that has reared itself when Slaughter was in danger, this ability reveals itself when her safety is in jeopardy and she needs to go on the defensive. This ability also has physical changes associated with it, including the sudden and rapid growth of the girl's hair, due to the different effects of the burst of chemicals coursing through her veins at this time. If Slaughter is threatened, a field of golden energy will bubble up and form a barrier around her person, and essentially cocoon her, protecting her from any attacks. Lasts two posts, cooldown of four posts.[/blockquote]  

Edit #1: Extras

If my abilities are approved:
On my extras, I would appreciate if all the graphics under that section could be wiped out and replaced by this:

Alter Ego (Sunny Skies):

A misfortunate chain of events unfolds for Slaughter as her human blood amalgamates with her Ooccan blood and corrupts her entire genomic blueprint. It is something about the overwhelming surge of unfamiliar hormones that seems to prompt a personality change in the young hybrid. After reaching the final stage of Purgatory, Slaughter's awakened powers seem to put a hold on the inhibiting neurotransmitters in her brain, induce supplementary re-uptakes of testosterone, and temporarily freeze her neural fear circuits. She receives no additional powers due to this alteration in character, other than a heightened sense of (perhaps false) invincibility. During this time, Slaughter's memory is clouded, and she will act far more aggressive, confident, and often forget who she is. At times she will claim to be a different person entirely.


[blockquote][b][u]Alter Ego (Sunny Skies):[/u][/b]

[img=http://i212.photobucket.com/albums/cc265/sanicomo/kagaminerinsunnyskies3.png align=left]A misfortunate chain of events unfolds for Slaughter as her human blood amalgamates with her Ooccan blood and corrupts her entire genomic blueprint. It is something about the overwhelming surge of unfamiliar hormones that seems to prompt a [b]personality change[/b] in the young hybrid. After reaching the final stage of [i]Purgatory[/i], Slaughter's awakened powers seem to put a hold on the inhibiting neurotransmitters in her brain, induce supplementary re-uptakes of testosterone, and temporarily freeze her neural fear circuits. She receives no additional powers due to this alteration in character, other than a heightened sense of (perhaps false) invincibility. During this time, Slaughter's memory is clouded, and she will act far more aggressive, confident, and often forget who she is. At times she will claim to be a different person entirely. [/blockquote]

[Owen Enders]

I'm good with this then.

2/3 ACCEPTED!

[Slaughter]

HNNG YAY!!!!

-waits giddily for another staff member

[Rwaht]

I'm fine with all this, but you'll need to post to the Shop to buy the MU, as a source of record-keeping. To be clear, you do want to get an MU right?

[Slaughter]

yes! Just like how Owen said(:

[Owen Enders]

Just posting to confirm the taking the monies from request in the Shop has been done.

[Rwaht]

All right, with that done, this be approved 'n' edited and whatnot. Also, I am a pirate. Yar.

[Slaughter]

Thank you kindly! It would appear that the code got messed up. I don't know why when I put something as a code it changes [img....] to <img.....>. It keeps doing that! The correct coding for the images is .

I know this is really specific and nit-picky for you guys, and if I could fix this myself, I would! I really want to. o.o
Is there anyway it can get fixed? I don't mean to be a big, huge, bothersome toad, but all the coding on my profile is tempting my upchuck reflex.

Also, on my Extras, I wanted for all the previous images to be erased and to just have my new Edit.
I really wish I could do this myself so I wouldn't have to bother you all ;-;

It's not as imperative as getting them approved, but just whenever one of y'all has time, I would really, really, really

[/b] appreciate and love and be so happy about it!

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[Rwaht]

Haha, no prob'. Consider it attended to.

[Slaughter]

Oh, it looks absolutely perfect! Thank you so much!